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0 posted 2001-04-12 04:51 PM


Insecure.

A confessed consipiracy theorist,
I feel I’m paranoid freak,
I’ve been to see an analyst,
He says I’m frail and weak,
I’m thinking maybe he’s a one,
The government is everywhere,
I go back and his office is gone,
And the people all just stare,
I think that they have tapped my phone,
And they are reading all my mail,
I’m feeling insecure in my home,
They won’t get me, they will fail,
They look at me from up in the sky,
With their satellite,
You can see them with your naked eye,
Or if it’s dark you might,
The government is after me,
They have pushed me to the brink,
Why won’t they just let me be,
Well their after me, I think?

Andrew.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-12 06:15 PM


Hey, I like this one!  I know people like this, they are so much fun!  
~Allan

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a fault!

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2 posted 2001-04-12 07:15 PM


This was fine but it wasn't your best. The idea was nice though. Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-04-13 11:21 AM


This was a pretty good poem.  Keep posting.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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