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dreamy_eyes
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 67

0 posted 2001-04-12 02:44 PM

There is something deep inside,I have no god he doesn't provide,
there is no love or any grace,
no god for me to love or hate,
I dont say things in a prayer,
I have family instead who care,
if the sky is misty or grey,
if anything bad happens I find a way,
if things are hard and I have to struggle,
god is not there for me to cuddle,
he is not there he is not right,
he is not strong or full of might,
his faith might be good and kind,
but through me it has not shined,
all these thoughts might just changed,
but probably when I'm at an older age,
there is a door of faith for me,
god hasnt yet unlocked it with his key,
his faith might be true and right,
but I've turned it out just like a light.

Luv Debi xXx

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-04-12 02:49 PM

Nice poem.
~C

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-12 05:24 PM

Very nicely done. I enjoyed this even though I did not agree with the general Idea.
However, very nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-04-13 02:34 PM

Seems like you're troubled with your beliefs. First of all, you have to strengthen you belief/faith. That you need to do first. He'll do the rest

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2001-04-13 02:52 PM

Sometimes I wonder if there is a God too, but some people just need osmething ot believe in. Great poem though. Very expressive.

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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