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dreamy_eyes
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0 posted 2001-04-12 02:36 PM


TATOO

I had a tatoo at the age of fifteen,
if only the outcome I could have seen,
in my parents eyes I could see their rage,
mainly because I was 3 years underage,
my best mate came with me to have it done,
he said it would exicting, different and fun,
I upset everyone close to me,
which I wish I couldn't see,
I wish I could re-live that day,
change it in every possible way,
my tatoo is a contant reminder of the guilt and shame,
but unfortunatly I am the only one to blame.


Luv Debi xXx  

[This message has been edited by Debbie Drugs (edited 04-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Debi - All Rights Reserved
Mysteria-Foxx
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1 posted 2001-04-12 02:49 PM


What was so wrong and terrible about your tattoo? I have one on my right shoulder. I love it to death. Life's too short to be ashamed. Maybe people should just open their minds a bit more, huh?

Fox

Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean.

dreamy_eyes
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2 posted 2001-04-12 02:51 PM


I love the tatoo of my frog on my breast but my family and friends didn't! I guess there just gonna have to get use to it!  

Luv Debi xXx  

Mysteria-Foxx
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3 posted 2001-04-12 03:05 PM


WooWoo! Froggies rule.  

Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean.

dreamy_eyes
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4 posted 2001-04-12 03:22 PM


I no they do! Froggies! So wots ures of then fox?

Luv Debi xXx  

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5 posted 2001-04-12 04:05 PM


There's nothing wrong with tatoos.  I'm gonna get one, eventually.  Needles frighten me though, but I think I'll close my eyes.  n e ways, Debbi, go to Teen Explorer because I think you might find something INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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6 posted 2001-04-12 05:55 PM


Well if you liked your tattoo then good....now from what I read was this: You got the tattoo with your mate.....yea and you liked it....but then your family gave you a reality check.
So now you feel all guilty and bla bla and you write this poem and you feel all bad about it. Ok....so then mystic or something replies to your poem saying tattoo's rock and stuff and you completely do a 360 and say "yea they rock w0h00".....so i'm confused here.......
what ARE your feelings about the tattoo? Is the poem true, or was it written just because you feel that guilt is the proper emotion for the situation?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-04-12 05:58 PM


Hey,

   Well I would say "Foock you its not your body  " oh well great poem

   -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Mysteria-Foxx
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8 posted 2001-04-12 06:14 PM


I have a celtic symbol on my right shoulder.  

Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean.

dreamy_eyes
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9 posted 2001-04-13 05:24 AM


The tatoo means a lot to me.  I feel guilty though as I no how my parents feel about them, and now my sister has had 1 just cos i did!  
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10 posted 2001-04-13 11:24 AM


I don't understand why people would get upset about a tattoo.  It's not one's appearance that counts, right?  Hmm..
Anyhow, nice poem.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

dreamy_eyes
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11 posted 2001-04-15 05:30 AM


Totally agree with you Marie, but if it's not appearance that counts why did I have it done.  Then again it's in a place me and my partner only see it so I guess it's just special to me.
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