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dreamy_eyes
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 67

0 posted 2001-04-12 07:08 AM

She's Gone - modified

Things for us werent going to well,
I tried to catch her but she fell,
I thought that she was happy and fine,
I wanted to hold her until she was mine,
the world I wanted to protect her from,
I loved her so much and now shes gone,
their are so many things which I dont understand,
like the suicuide note clenched tightly in her hand,
she explained how she thought she'd made my life hell,
my feeling I showed but never did tell,
I loved her so much and I think she loved me,
Isnt that the way feelings things should be?,
when I was with her I felt so alive,
I would have died so she could survive,
I like to believe she is with me always,
for as long as I live, for the rest of my days.

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-04-12 10:45 AM

Nice poem, I'm sorry to hear that such a painful thing happened to you. But I think you are right, she will always be with you, watching over you.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

dreamy_eyes
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 67

2 posted 2001-04-12 11:45 AM

Thanks Jon, I believe she is!

Luv Debi xXx

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-04-12 12:31 PM

this was really sad, it brings back too many memories for me. i'm sorry that you lost someone that was close to you, and i'm sure she is.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

4 posted 2001-04-12 01:01 PM

Hey,

This is so sad, (no joke) I was about to cry reading it. This is one for my library. And if there is a "Heaven" I know she is there and watching over you

Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-12 05:21 PM

I liked this. Very good poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

dreamy_eyes
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 67

6 posted 2001-04-13 05:26 AM

Yes I no it's sad, but I meant everything I said in the poem. I loved her, but I've moved on but she will always have a place in my heart forever.

Luv Debi xXx

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-04-13 11:26 AM

This is so sad. I'm sorry that things are hard right now. I hope things only get better.
As for the poem, it's very well written, and powerful. Nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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