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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Something I came up with while I was bored as hell and listen to excessive amounts of rap music and thinking about a girl I like but can only be friends with for now and seemingly ever. I'd say enjoy but I won't be suprised if you don't. So few true blue left I don't know what to do, but just remember boo, I got you and I'm there for you cuz I'm down for whatever you may be going through...and thats for real. no real form...a rather dull rhyming scheme...and not all that intelligent...oh well, she still liked it. I'll post some actuall poetry sooner or later. till then...peace, love, and anything else that can be processed, packaged, and priced 5x what it's worth. >¶Øʆ< |
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orange()alligator Junior Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 21 |
-tony- lol hi, this poem of yours made me laugh. boo??? dude i'm not gonna have to start calling you homie poa or some equally lame rap name am i??? ;-)well c ya -berg- |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was weird haha......it was ok. Not my fav.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I'd say it was good, just need to expand it and try to make a real rap, or whatever it is you're going for. Good start though Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Mysteria-Foxx Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 11 |
Word homie g funk.  Who needs to always be intellectual? Sometimes just showing character is enough. Thanks, I needed that.  Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean. [This message has been edited by Mysteria-Foxx (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, hahah weird is the word -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Yo cuz, the rhyme is ill for real, keep it fresh an' poppin. that was off da blicka. tee hee. that was interesting (boo), i'd be interested to see what happens if you expand on this particular piece. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I didn't like this one as much as I like your other work. keep sharing, though. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha..... not the greatest but at least you included that in your footnote. I look forward to some of your decent works, Tony. (ooooh) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yo yo yo, sup mah homie? Long time no speaks yo! Dis..thing..hehe...yehh yeh yeh it was trippin, yo! PEACE! ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I've created a monster.... "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hehe...::giggles::: reminds me of the time this guy gave my best friend a really scary violent rapsong..not that this is violent i mean its a lil rap for a chick..n.m i make no sence lol buh bye *KiM* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Weird... but I liked it. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Okay banburycross we are going to have to work oh your hrm how to say this ghetto language hahah-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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