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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2001-04-11 11:05 PM


I see the way you look at me
Your eyes like a child's
looking at chocolates and candies
Wanting a taste...

Maybe you've seen my eyes too

But I don't feel like a child
I feel like a hunter,
a feline out on the prowl
Pressing to tease
Ready to pounce
Naughty smiles, hungry eyes

....Just a taste


(Yes this is about Nancy for anyone that's curious.   )


I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too.  

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-12 04:15 AM


GEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeshhhhhh!!!!!!
If only a girl would write a poem like this about me!!!! *pants*
This poem was....erm.....well let's just say it was HARD to concintrate.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2001-04-12 08:29 AM


hmmm nice  

Love which is not always springing is always dying.

Kahlil Gibran

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3 posted 2001-04-12 12:19 PM


This is great, it's definetely going into my library.  playfulness if very sexy.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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The Backstreet Boy
4 posted 2001-04-12 01:18 PM


Hey,

   Okay...This was a cool poem  

    -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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5 posted 2001-04-12 06:20 PM


I know what Ban is talking about.  
That Nancy..... is one lucky lady, to have the Dark Enchantress herself weaving a seduction spell upon her.
If only I was so fortunate.  
~Allan

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a fault!

Spine Grinder
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6 posted 2001-04-12 07:17 PM


I agree with the others very...... sexy.

*s* staci

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7 posted 2001-04-13 11:20 AM


Haha, Ban!  
This is a very well written poem!  I enjoyed the read.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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