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Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2001-04-11 06:03 PM

[This is for my boyfriend, who everyday makes me want to stick around just to see if things can possibly get any better]

Close your eyes, and for once don't fight the coming sleep;
The night's too dark for soul searching, and thoughts run much too deep.
Don't wonder if the moonlight shining next to you will stay-
You're too far gone to fight it, too tired to run away.
Lay any doubts to rest, put all worries aside.
There's a promise of tomorrow for every time you've cried.
Stop digging up the past, don't dwell on where you've been.
You've made it through the darkness, now you'll never run again.
Rest easy now tonight in the arms that once were cursed.
This dream will never leave you - you'll have to leave it first.

"Don't spoons just make you smile? My friend is more of a FORK person, the butterknife makes me cry..." -Hallucinations in Blond

[This message has been edited by Kandi (edited 04-11-2001).]

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2001-04-11 07:03 PM

Argh stupid me...I forgot something very important...this also goes out to a good friend of mine around the forum...thanks for all your help w/ everything and for always being there...you told me I'd write again, and well I did, so this is for you

Thanks guys
~K~

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-11 10:14 PM

Well I think this is touching, not only the poem but the footnote as well. I don't know you so I can't say it's directed to me though.

Nonetheless, a great job.
I'm bumping this back to page one. So I guess you have something to thank me for after all?

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-12 04:18 AM

Nicely done. I liked it......hope things do get better for you and your bf....

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2001-04-12 08:30 AM

this is a good poem. Just keep writing them alright, cuz I wanna read them.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-04-12 10:51 AM

This was nice. 100% sincere. Hope things go better for the two of you.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2001-04-12 12:35 PM

This was really well done, it had a very peaceful feeling to me. really beautifully written, i hope i get to read more.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

7 posted 2001-04-12 12:55 PM

Hey,

I loved it, it was great. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

8 posted 2001-04-12 04:41 PM

Hey guys-
thanks so much for the honest and sincere comments, I really appreciate it.
One thing I want to clear up...in the footnote when i said I stick around to see if things can possibly get better, I didn't mean that they are bad...I meant that things are soooo amazingly wonderful now that I can't wait to see if it is possible to be any happier than I already am...it was supposed to be a positive thing

It's cool that you guys interpreted it ur own way though.
Bye for now - love u all
~K~

"Don't spoons just make you smile? My friend is more of a FORK person, the butterknife makes me cry..." -Hallucinations in Blond

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-12 11:57 PM

To be honest with you. If I was the guy you wrote this for, I would never agin leave your arms. This is totally beautiful. I love it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-04-13 10:50 AM

This is beautiful, Kandi. It's a wonderful tribute. Whoever you wrote it for I hope feels very lucky that he has you. This is a very nicely written poem.. one to be proud of.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

11 posted 2001-04-15 10:26 PM

wow...you seem like a total sweetie..and your b.f is lucky to have you!!
*KiM*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

12 posted 2001-04-16 02:59 AM

i liked this..oh i wish sumone would write sumthing like that for ME..hehhehe...its really sweet and shows you care alot about your boyfriend...he's lucky to have you..

i liked this poem...really sweet and sincere

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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