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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-04-11 02:15 PM


I've always told the truth,
there's only one person
I've ever lied to.
That was Justin,
not you four.
So I don't seem to understand
why you think I lied to you
why you came up to me
why you yelled at me.
When all I did was tell the truth.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

© Copyright 2001 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-11 06:34 PM


I can't say that I really understand this situation, but this poem is well written. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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2 posted 2001-04-11 08:02 PM


nice poem, i might have to read it more then once, i also really liked your poem " you taught me" sorry i didn't reply to it. peace out and take care,.
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3 posted 2001-04-11 08:26 PM


  Awwww..idnit just the opposite of peachy when people don't believe you?? Man oh man..hope the sit. gets all-good soon.
  ~Carly

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

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4 posted 2001-04-11 08:40 PM


Good poem here Allysa, but i also was very lost on the topic..maybe write one that explains this one a little better..that would be cool
I would like to read it if you did it..
thanks for posting
Jeff  

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5 posted 2001-04-11 10:24 PM


Not bad... a short.  But it seems like it's something personal so I won't tread there.  
~Allan

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a fault!

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6 posted 2001-04-11 11:21 PM


im sorry you have to go thru this, but this is a part of life.  hope things are better Allysa ~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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7 posted 2001-04-12 04:09 AM


Sounds more like a vent than a poem. Allysa.......you ok? Need somebody to talk?
I'm here....

Allysa
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8 posted 2001-04-12 08:22 AM


Alright, I'ma write another poem explaning everything, okay, so you all just check it out.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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9 posted 2001-04-12 12:01 PM


This was short but it got my attention, i look forward to the poem that helps me understand the situation a little better.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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10 posted 2001-04-12 01:36 PM


Hey,

   Great as always  


    -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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