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Aphrodite's Innocence

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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 04-11-2001 11:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Dark blue skies
looked like they could
crack open wide
and release a storm
Not that it'd matter to me
I'm a tickled girl
It's my fantasy

Secret language
of erotic sides
So they don't know
that I'm telling you,
"Let's go to the back room"
I'm a criminal, baby
You made me that way

Bet you think it's weird
I always like to play pretend
All and all
we never go back
Not after the first touch
Never after the last

I remember last night you said
that you thought
you were in over your head
Don't let me scare you

I'm just a little girl




I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too.  

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).]

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1 posted 04-11-2001 12:44 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Ooh sweet!     I really liked this one... dark and seductive.  It made me itch with delight.  
Very well done.  I enjoyed this immensely.  
~Allan

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a <i>fault!</i>

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2 posted 04-11-2001 01:47 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

whoa!thats was too kewl! awesome! that was amazing like Allan said "dark and seductive"

regina

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3 posted 04-11-2001 03:09 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

This is very dark... I love the ending!  Wonderful job.  Thanks for sharing!

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 04-11-2001 05:47 PM       View Profile for Attack Ferrit   Email Attack Ferrit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Attack Ferrit

wow! that was great. i really like the lines
"Don't let me scare you
I'm just a little girl"
really great.


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5 posted 04-12-2001 03:42 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

JUST a little girl? HA!
Nicely done though. I liked this poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 04-12-2001 10:49 AM       View Profile for keoni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for keoni

I really liked this one also. Really good piece.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

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7 posted 04-12-2001 02:03 PM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

      I am speechless it was superb…thats all I can say is superb oh and its going into my library. Until your next masterpiece

   -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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Hey,

      I am speechless it was superb…thats all I can say is superb oh and its going into my library. Until your next masterpiece

   -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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9 posted 04-09-2002 02:24 AM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

"All and all
we never go back
Not after the first touch
Never after the last"

Regret does nothing, as you and I have talked about. See the past for what it is, and work on the present, while preparing for the future. Sorry, ramble. After that first touch.... it's terribly difficult to stop. And after the last... why not have some more? Is there truely a last then?

"I'm just a little girl"

Don't we all at times wish we could go back to being young? For some, an age of innocence; for others, an age of simplicity. For others... simply less experiences. How many of us had much forced on us so sooner then seems right?

My memina, a good write. Much enjoyed.

Your's Truely,
Mon Verite


"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (04-09-2002 02:25 AM).]

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10 posted 04-09-2002 07:05 AM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Darling, sometimes you take my words far too literally. I was being sarcastic.

"I never claimed to be your savior
I said I had a dirty mouth
Stop analyzing my behavior
If you’re too dumb to work it out"
Garbage

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"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

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