End of the World - Our Exodus

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fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

0 posted 2001-04-11 03:37 AM

No more tears of hate
Forget those colour'd faces
Brother, sister..  split

Within the concrete walls of paradise
There lies a man of servitude and love.

Fill out the papers..not once..not twice..but thrice.
Devotion for your government above.

Who you are, where you've been, where you'll go, where you'll die...

In accordance with protocol 1-15B
Workman's orders to fix junction
A-12 of internal fluid ducts for
City of Utopia, sweet refuge from
Hellish misery and land of death

    CRASH

1>VICTIM UNACCOUNTED FOR:
CIRCUMSTANCES SURROUNDING
DISAPPEARANCE UNKNOWN
LOCATION UNKNOWN
MENTAL FACULTIES
      UNKNOWN

Breaking Point

   Horror!
The wall's behind me now.
I'm in lands of death and hate,
Forgotten by the saved,
Forsaken by my God.

I breathe, I breath, I take within myself
The sweet and gracious air of lands of life.
Vines crawl up and vines embrace a land of strife...

Testimony

A short trial
Verdict pronounced.
INSANITY

RECOMMENDATION:
1 YEAR OF PSYCH
EXAMINATION AND
INTENSIVE CARE
OF NEURO-CHEM
FACULTIES OF
MIND

The Resistance

Sirens honk and claxons wail
"A break a break into this jail!"
"Funny you should say that, but..."

The Homecoming

"We know who you are"
"Join with us and leave this place"
"Escape mother's womb..."

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-11 10:36 AM

This is NUTS!

I loved it!
Especially "brother, sister... split." Wow!

So disorganized, all over the place, such a mess of creativity...
In where this series belongs, my library!
~Allan

Love is like the wind; it can suddenly blow softly in your face or it can come strong.
~~Aaron (Low Man's Lyric)

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-11 07:26 PM

This was completely insane........I kept on feeling like each stanza was by a dif. voice.....dif. speaker....comepletely messed up poem. I loved it.....one of my favs by you hahaha.....Odd man....just plain odd. It inspired me to write in a new style actually. Thanks!
Oh and look this up in the bible :
Exodus 8:2

always found that interesting.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-04-11 07:30 PM

Hey,

Okay this was off the wall

haha it was cool to read though

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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