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luvnkris
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0 posted 2001-04-26 02:37 AM




Your eyes

I know that when I look into your eyes
Really look into those gorgeous blue eyes
That everything will be ok
In your eyes I see everything that I need
Sometimes I feel so hopeless and alone
Then I look into your eyes
And everything is ok
Even when we’ve been fighting
And it feels like everything is lost
You ask me to look at you
And I can’t help but love you
For over 9 months I’ve looked into your eyes
Whenever I am troubled or upset
And everytime I do
I realise how much I love you

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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1 posted 2001-04-26 10:07 AM


this is SO sweet!! Very nicely done!  
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2 posted 2001-04-26 10:24 AM


awww this was soo cute!!!.....
...except of courseone thing...
i dont have blue eyes!!!...
hehehe...great poem

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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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3 posted 2001-04-26 10:32 AM


this a sweet poem
i realy liked it.great job
keep writing

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4 posted 2001-04-26 10:37 AM


Cool I really liked it. It's great. keep up the good work.
Zu

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5 posted 2001-04-26 01:34 PM


Hey,

    Sweet!!! in both senses of the word. Until you next poem

    -- Linc

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6 posted 2001-04-26 06:09 PM


This is really sweet.
awwwwwwwwwww

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-04-26 08:22 PM


Cute.  Made me smile.   <-- Like this.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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luvnkris
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8 posted 2001-04-28 04:40 AM



geez guys i luvs ya's all! fankx for ur replys, they make me happy!   <-- like this!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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