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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Love is like the wind; it can suddenly blow softly in your face or it can come strong. We may notice it or we may even ignore it. Sadly enough though, if we ignore it right away and notice it later, the wind has probably chosen a new face to blow in. "Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die." |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
great! i liked it! Regina |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I need a new signature. Can I use this? Of course I'll quote it to your name.  Thanks in advance! ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
what was the quote about allan? and yea the poem was great! keep writing |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very good poem! I think you could expand on it a little, but I do like it. Nice job. --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Yeah you can use it as your signature Allan, as long as you quote it to my name, he he. My name is Aaron. "Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
 Love is like the wind; it can suddenly blow softly in your face or it can come strong. We may notice it or we may even ignore it. Sadly enough though, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
 It's too huge!  |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
WOW 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Interesting topic. Its kinda like you dont know hwat youve got until its gone. Keep posting! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I thought the ideas and the wording in this poem were truly excellent. i thought that you might have been able to expand on this a little, but it was a good piece nonetheless. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked this one alot. Yeah it was short, but I wouldn't expand on it. IT is excellent how it is. I think I'll add it to the library. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done!  |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Thanks everyone, your so kind. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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