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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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NOTE: not very good. I just miss posting A new Perspective... Close your eyes... Release yourself from the fantasy that society has created Separate yourself from everything you've believed and debated Now open them... See a new world, and all it's simplicity Evaluate your existence, and marvel it's complexity Free your mind... Take a deep breath, and remember who you are, not who you were or what you've been so far Close your eyes Now open them Free your mind Get a new perspective """ Maybe it's stupid Maybe it's nothing Maybe this something... just wont go away .. I'm not a liar I'm not a sinner I'm just trying... not to get thrown away """ Full Devil Jacket [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-10-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha! When I read this in my mind, it was to the voice from "The Outer Limits." Very cool!  Thanks for the post, Jason. I miss you too!  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha.. when it said "Close your eyes" I actually did it and then remembered that they need to be open for me to read... hehe. I don't think that's something I should be admitting... Anyway, this poem is very creative. You did a nice job. It's good for you to be posting again  --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-10-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
see, i considered "actually" closing my eyes and then attempting to read the rest of the poem but then i realized, that's something marie would do, and i stopped myself. this is a really great poem, i didn't think it was bad at all and i'm certainly glad you decided to post something again. i hope you keep posting your work. oh, and marie, umm... you know i love you sweetie...  Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
you missed posting? damn....hope u missed me?lol jk. this was an amazing post! Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Allan - haha... actually I had the same type of voice in mind when I wrote it. I'm thinking about doing some writting again so you might see me around a little more once I get in the swing of things. Marie ~ hehe... I knew someone would do that... infact when I wrote it I thought gee this is stupid... haha thanks for reading banburycross ~ lol, you crack me up. I'm really happy that you liked it. Regina ~ of course I miss ya!!! like I was saying hopefully I'll be back a little more in the near future.Thanks again every one |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey hey hey! Glad to see ya again. This had some good stuff, I thought it wasn't too bad. ~Carly NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I read it in the voice of a midget.....you know....just to get a new perspective. Well done Jason....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
 . . . . ... I just tried that, Javier! You are a GENIUS! |
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