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Greeneyes617
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0 posted 2001-04-10 01:03 AM


W henever I am
Ready,
I
Turn into an
Evil
Rambunctious
Spider,

Because
Living
Outside of
Cambodia is
Killing me!



© Copyright 2001 Malinda C. Duggan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-10 01:04 AM


Brilliant!  This truly is the result of writer's block!  
Great working with you Malinda!  And for all the others, this one only took me a few seconds but she worked really hard on her part.     
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Greeneyes617
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2 posted 2001-04-10 01:09 AM


YEAH right Allan.   It didn't take me that long to write it...What took the most time was finding out how to spell rambunctious.  
Its still pretty bad though. Guess thats what happens when you got writer's block!

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3 posted 2001-04-10 01:11 AM


I'm sorry but what's in Cambodia?
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4 posted 2001-04-10 01:13 AM


Best "C" place.  
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5 posted 2001-04-10 02:40 AM


hahaha its ok dopes i don't even know where all the states are located at so its alright  
and for the poem it was short but good...

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6 posted 2001-04-10 07:19 AM


  YEAH!! NUTHER COLLABORATION!!!! Great job kids. You coulda used Canada.......
  ~Carly

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7 posted 2001-04-10 07:40 AM


Hey,

     It was nice keep it up and until next time

         -- Linc

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8 posted 2001-04-10 07:52 AM


amazing both of you. very intersting lively read.
Regina

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9 posted 2001-04-10 11:49 AM


giggle giggle.  thanks for the read you guys.  *sigh*  allan gets all the girls  

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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10 posted 2001-04-10 03:37 PM


Heh.. this was a fun one to read.
Nice job, you guys!

--Marie

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11 posted 2001-04-10 04:25 PM


You two work great together! I really enjoyed this one, very cute. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Greeneyes617
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12 posted 2001-04-10 11:47 PM


Thanks everyone. I have had MAJOR writer's block for the last month or so and have been spending most of my time in the Ally.   Which has probably became my favorite place.
C-ya next time everyone (don't hold your breath)  

*~*Malinda*~*

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13 posted 2001-04-11 06:14 PM


geez, Allan is a colaborating tramp... haha
I love it though
Hope your writer's block goes a way
Jason

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