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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 04-09-2001 11:14 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Note: This is really crappy but it's basic and that's all I can get from this topic. I like this girl in one of my classes so I just spilled out some stuff again. You know the deal.

Nancy's got lustful lips
and a beautiful smile
Swinging hips and
perfect eyeshadow
Nails always done
and long wavy hair
She wants to be
a stripper after high school
and a playboy bunny
It's always been her thing
She's got the look
Not that I've noticed

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

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1 posted 04-09-2001 11:54 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Hehehe..... I like the last line.  It's a bit innocent... very good job.  
We always fall for the ones we can't have, eh?  *sigh...*  
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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Who ever said I can't have her?  

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

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3 posted 04-10-2001 01:03 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Oh hey now that was a nice reply dark, haha.
Great poem! I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 04-10-2001 08:32 AM       View Profile for banburycross   Email banburycross   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for banburycross

tee hee.  i like this one a lot, the mood isn't as dark as most of your work but it's just as well written as evrything else.  keep writing beautiful poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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5 posted 04-10-2001 08:59 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

lol @ Dark.  Nice attitude about it.. You'll go far with that  
As for the poem, I think you did a very nice job.. it's nice to see a change in the ambiance of your poetry.  Nice job.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 04-10-2001 09:44 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

hahahahahahahaha.....this was great. definate mood uplifter. very different. library piece.

Regina
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7 posted 05-10-2001 06:51 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

ha ha
that wasn't nice to say
put me in a better mood though  

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So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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8 posted 11-09-2002 06:50 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Ohhh I like this. very nice.

~AF~

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss.......


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heh, I loved the last line too...good one Jaime

Are you scared?                                          BOO! Are you now?

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10 posted 01-31-2003 07:53 PM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

Heh... I enjoyed this piece, Memina. It seems slightly different then your normal pieces (what I've read), but yet, still, similar. What inspired it? Just a passing glance/impression of a person?

~Titus

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
                 --Aldous Huxley

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