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0 posted 2001-04-08 07:17 PM


There is something about this day
the day we all call christmas
the Jesus child's birthday
like a candle in the evening light
we wish upon the brightest star above
to lighten up our christmas night

It's christmas time, christmas love
the air is crystal clear
so open up your hearts, and let the spirit in
listen to the christmas love
floating underneath you this silent night

There's something special this year
can you hear it calls you
christmas feelings everywhere
snow flakes are falling from the sky
close your eyes as they hits your face
thinking back on your christmas night

It's christmas time, christmas love
the air is crystal clear
so open up your hearts, and let the spirit in
listen to the christmas love
floating underneath you this silent night

the christmas star is placed on the tree
now let the christmas songs set you free
may your every wish come true
let me give my gift to you
straight from the heart this special night

It's christmas time, christmas love
the air is crystal clear
so open up your hearts, and let the spirit in
listen to the christmas love
floating underneath you this silent night

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-08 09:29 PM


It's about 70 degrees outside, but it still feels like Christmas to me now! The love that comes with the season of our Savior's birth is just amazing, and it knocks me off of my feet each year. I'm looking forward to it already. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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2 posted 2001-04-08 09:30 PM


Great work here, brings the feeling of Christmas near..
Jeff

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viginia
3 posted 2001-04-09 02:01 PM


I've been sick and some christmas memories were just what i needed.  great job and keep posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-04-09 07:37 PM


This is something that should be posted in the Holiday forum....but like......4 months ago haha.
Nicely done though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-04-09 08:31 PM


This brought mixed emotions, im no grinch who hates christmas, But i have some REALLY bad christmas memories. I liked this, anyway, And its still a great poem, but i just think everyone should say what they really think...and this is what i really think...in conclusion, i have mixed feelings about this post

Death is but an escape from loneliness

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6 posted 2001-05-03 04:32 PM


I don't care if it's May
Merry Christmas to you  
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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