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Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 16
NY,NY

0 posted 2001-04-08 04:51 PM

I feel the sweat its kinda vague
I feel the heart you took away
smiles gone, from upon your face
smiles gone you look away
Days went by, but im all good
felt thing i never knew i could
grew strong like i knew i would
days went by, but im all good

Heart pumps fast
but i
but i don’t want to be this way
heart falls fast
as you
as you start to run that way

All i want is kinda bad
feel inferior, like u wish i had
smell the smoke as you get mad
walked away like you wish i had
dreams of war its kinda meek
dreams of death cause im to weak
all i want, is you next to me
but now you laugh cause you see im week

You looked good
but i
didn’t mean to be
that way
i looked good
but god
let me back again

Need a night alone my self
can’t survive with no one else
Close my eyes and hope for hell
close my eyes and quick to tell

You looked good
and i
know you be this way
you looked good
but i
cant be back again

You said, was good and kinda sweet
someone to sweep you off your feet
fall down and to your knees
fall down cause its all me
i know im wrong, its kinda dream
i know im wrong and i feel free
I guess im so strong, im kinda week
im so strong i will not speak

Heart pumps fast
but i
but i don’t want to be this way
heart falls fast
as you
as you leave me here today.

Mike Sacks
2:12am Eastern, Wednesday, August 09 2000

My other netpoets user name is the mike sacks, thats the name i post my poetry on, but my songs i post on this.

The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

1 posted 2001-04-08 05:28 PM

LOVE MOST~

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

2 posted 2001-04-08 07:48 PM

Yay! I'm not the only one who notes the time on their writings! lol

Anyways...

You looked good
but i
didn’t mean to be
that way
i looked good
but god
let me back again
-- My favorite part.. keep it up, this was great!

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-09 04:46 AM

I enjoyed this. You write well.
Are you in a band or anything?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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