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Kosetsu
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0 posted 2001-04-08 11:15 AM


Drifter in the dark,
Biting words, oh so stark,
Drifter Drifter, leave your mark,
Drifter in the dark.

Drifter in the night,
Who can say what’s wrong or right?
Drifter Drifter, out of sight,
Drifter in the night.

Drifter by the call,
Icy calm, strong and tall,
Drifter Drifter, timing stall,
Drifter by the call.

Drifter enigmatic,
Thoughts scattered, gone erratic,
Drifter Drifter, automatic
Drifter enigmatic.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

© Copyright 2001 Adam Kamerer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-08 11:31 AM


Much enjoyed!  I haven't played FF in a very long time so I'm having trouble putting this one on a character... assuming it's even one of those poems.  
Either way, I really did enjoy this one.  You have a really intriguing style, man.  
~Allan

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2 posted 2001-04-08 12:57 PM


Nice job, Kosetsu.  I don't know what all the FF stuff is, but I enjoyed reading this poem just the same.  Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

Kosetsu
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3 posted 2001-04-08 02:11 PM


Actually, this one is about an original character of mine, from an online Megaman X RPG. His name is Drifter, thus the poem.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

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4 posted 2001-04-08 03:31 PM


Very nicely done. I felt that this poem was really well written. Wonderful read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-04-08 07:44 PM


  Your style...rocks! Keep up the superb work like this, it was great.  
  ~Carly

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6 posted 2001-04-08 09:32 PM


I'm not really into RPGs, but this is a great character description. The style and wording are perfect. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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7 posted 2001-04-09 02:06 PM


Great style and beautiful writing.  this is going into the library for sure.  keep writing and posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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