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Some One
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0 posted 2001-04-07 07:21 AM


I hate it when u don't speak to me
i hate it when u ignore me,

but i still don't care about anything like that
i am still intrested in being with you,

even tho you arent intrested in me
it just feels good being with you,
to see you, to hear you,

but in the end i know that,
i'll never get the chance to be with you,

I Love you.



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AngelShell
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1 posted 2001-04-07 07:50 AM


Welcome to Passions Some One.

A very good poem.  I feel honored to be the first one to reply.  Good luck in future writing.

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2 posted 2001-04-07 08:04 AM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a very good first post. Full of emotion. Thanks for sharing it! I hope to see more of your work soon.

PS:check your e-mail


"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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banburycross
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viginia
3 posted 2001-04-07 11:11 AM


Welcome to passions!!  This is a good first post, and i look forward to see more of your work.  keep posting and replying.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-04-07 12:00 PM


Hey,

     This is a great start. I have already read one of your other poems and you just keep adding to my library. I love your poetry I hope to stay at passions for a long time. Until your next poem

      -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2001-04-07 01:37 PM


Very good poem!! Nice start here. Welcome welcome!!

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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6 posted 2001-04-07 02:30 PM


Nicely done here....I read this in teen explorer.....so you know what I think  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away
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7 posted 2001-04-07 10:33 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Very nice first post.. I can't wait to read more!

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

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