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Linc
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0 posted 2001-04-06 05:04 PM


This poem was really bad so I am getting it closed or whatever. Until next time

       -- Linc


"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 04-06-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-07 03:06 AM


You shouldn't have posted it if you weren't gonna keep it up.....but hey...that's life right?
*does a little dance for everybody to entertain them for even coming into this thread*

Good things can come out of nothing!?
See!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-04-07 03:28 AM


Thanks Dopey for the ah...what did you call it?  Entertainment?

Anyway, dissapointed that you took the poem down, but what the hey, that's life.

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3 posted 2001-04-07 03:30 AM


YES! It's called entertainment!
WHat?! You didn't like it?  
Well why don't you show me something, huh?!
C'mon now!


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4 posted 2001-04-07 05:38 AM


Hey!  I'm dancing around naked in Explorer what more do you want!!!!!
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5 posted 2001-04-07 11:29 AM


i wish you hadn't taken it down, just becaue i would like the chance to read more of your work, but such is life.  i hope i get a chance in the near future.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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6 posted 2001-04-07 11:47 AM


*clap* hahah  I know I changed my mind after the fact *shrug*

      -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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7 posted 2001-04-07 01:34 PM


It happens!  I did the same thing with my first free verse.  It sucked!  
Well at least Javier is entertaining us.  
*claps to the beat of the music as Javier dances*
Yeah!
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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8 posted 2001-04-07 04:21 PM


same here remember allan?hehe also with another poem so its all good yea we all do it  

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9 posted 2001-04-07 04:33 PM


Well just so you know, I read the poem but didn't reply to it right away.  So don't go thinking it went unseen   Dopey's dancing?  I think I'll go in the other room, this could get dangerous...

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"  
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10 posted 2001-04-08 02:10 AM


*tap dances for everybody so fast that everybody compares him to Lord of the dance*
tap tap tap tap tatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatatap


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11 posted 2001-04-08 07:26 AM


Hahaha *claps*
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12 posted 2001-04-08 12:36 PM


That's just plain absurd Dopey.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"  
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13 posted 2001-04-08 03:06 PM


I'm sorry
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14 posted 2001-04-08 04:27 PM


Don't you know if you're gonna tap dance, you need tap shoes!  

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"  
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15 posted 2001-04-08 04:28 PM


Oh yea.....so whale blubber just doesn't cut it for you anymore lake? huh?!


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16 posted 2001-04-08 04:31 PM


Hey,

   I liked his dancin    heheh

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17 posted 2001-04-08 04:32 PM


well you actually managed to lose me there.

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18 posted 2001-04-08 04:35 PM


hahahaha  So lakewalker whats this blubber thing ???

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19 posted 2001-04-08 05:41 PM


I don't know......................

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20 posted 2001-04-09 04:43 AM


Hahaha......go to teen explorer....in the truth or dare thread.......
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21 posted 2001-04-09 03:58 PM


Ah, I see more craziness huh?? Thanks Dopey. Now I feel I came in for a reason.  

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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22 posted 2001-04-09 08:09 PM


No problem.....this place isn't only for poems ya know? It's about FUN!

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