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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Wanting to break out Create anew, expect more..... ...It's just war again "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, simplicity was never so complicated  And as for your Critigues message, we're all still learning to write poetry, in fact I don't think there's ever been a poet who knew everything, that would take away half the fun. Haven't seen you around before, if I've just missed you then I appologise. You're a talent. Shell. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done here frac. The thought was awesome. I liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, I think you may have started a fan club here. Me and Dopey, now there's a sight!!! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very good! The length is perfect. Nice job. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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