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AsBurYAnGel
Junior Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 14
Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-05 07:54 PM

The book of my life is empty
All the pages have been ripped out
All it took was a split second,
It all disappeared

My love left me,
I am all alone

I must start over now
Writing it down as I go
Creating new pages
Filled with love, laughter, and disappointment

I know that the pages of this book will be torn out too.
For when you have lost your one true love
Your life really is empty
And can never be fully put back in
Page by page.

As soon as I add a page it is torn out,
One after the other
I look back at the book of my life,
It is Empty.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-04-05 09:36 PM

welcome to passions! great work. hope to see more.
regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-04-05 09:38 PM

Welcome to passions!! this is a really great first post with lots of emotion and a powerful ending. i look forward to reading lots more.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-05 09:45 PM

Awesome freeverse my friend. Welcome to Passions, I'm sure you'll be spending lots of time here.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-06 01:20 PM

Welcome to Passions!
This was quite a sad post to start off with. HOwever, I did enjoy it. I hope that all gets better in your life and urge you to come in here more and reply/post/interact with others......

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-06 05:19 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

It's good to see that you've decided to join our family here in Passions in Poetry. Hope you enjoy. pls check your email

With regards to your poem, You need to look into the bright side. Someone will come and sweep you off yur feet one of these days. The true love of your life....

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-04-06 06:50 PM

"Ob la di, ob la da, life goes on..." Mite not seem like it, but it really does...very good poem here...keep yer chin up, and smile. It helps...

~Carly

A hungry man picks fruit from a tree and eats it; a hungry civilized man buys it from a man who, in turn, buys it from the man who picks it.
~K.G.

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