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When I Saw You
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
When I saw you for the first time, I knew you would be the one. You're my very last thought, when my day is done. You're always on my mind. From the time I wake up till the time I sleep. And in my romantic dream, I gave you my heart to keep. When I see your beautiful smile its like a warm sunny day, that I hope will never go away. I wanted to tell you this sooner, I was just waiting for the right time. Now all I have to say is, will you be mine? "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I wrote this poem for a girl and I put it into her locker and later on when I talked to her she said she already had a boyfriend. Why are all the good ones already taken? "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
well even if she has a boyfriend it was still a sweet thing to do and a wonderful poem to give her. nice writing! Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is sweet. It's sweet that you gave it to her, too, even though she's taken. Nicely done. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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AsBurYAnGel Junior Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 14Virginia |
This is really sweet. I loved it! |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
I agree.. that is really sweet! I would love to find that in my locker.  Keep posting! *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I love this poem its going straight to my library keep this up I LOVE IT omg this is a great poem (sorry I am hyper) this is going to Penny (a friend of mine) she would love this. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Sorry I didn't hit library |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... this is indeed very cute. I truly did enjoy it, you wrote it well, regardless of how it all ended up. Hope to see more of you in here. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Aww it's sad that she was taken....but it's good she was comitted enough to stay true to her boyfriend. Better luck next time!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Yeah but im fine. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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