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HappyPretender
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0 posted 2001-04-04 01:21 PM


No one knows
Of the tears I cry
Or the pain
I hold inside
Never seen
Never heard
Trapped all in
My own little world

© Copyright 2001 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-04 04:32 PM


short and to the point the way i like poems good job on this one
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2 posted 2001-04-04 06:06 PM


I have felt like this many times. well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away
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3 posted 2001-04-04 07:46 PM


This is short, but very good, nice job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-04-05 06:38 PM


Ah... such a quick read.  It makes the meaning pierce like the tip of a pin.  
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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