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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-04-04 08:25 AM

All around me I see,
a world full of plastic people.

And I wonder why I can't be,
one of those plastic people.

But when I see their cold stare,
I feel sad for those plastic people.

Because they'll never have what I have,
they'll always be plastic people.

They'll be that way because,
they were made to be plastic people.

Because they sterotyped someone else,
now their forced to be plastic people.

And because of all the pain they've caused,
they will forever be plastic people.

But yet I feel sad for them because,
they are not meant to be plastic people.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-04 08:48 AM

i really liked the concept behind this poem, sometimes i think there are too many people like this in my life. anyway, good work and keep posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-04-04 01:46 PM

You see, youa nd I are two different facets of society, and those plastic people are a few more varieties. The difference between you and us, is that I used to be sorry for them, now I just let them destroy themselves and each otehr, I have no faith in them. But be cool! Great poem!!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-04 06:05 PM

Very nice allysa. I think you've spoken a lot of good thoughts within this poem. I truly enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-06 05:38 PM

Not bad Allysa
not you best, but not bad
I've seen you do much better lately
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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