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Maybe she loves me |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I only knew you for a few months And already you will out live me by decades The time we spent together are for our memories You will just have to remember them more often For you see I wanted to live my life And girl with you I've done just that Except you will live longer then I and will cry more than I have Just watch me beautiful and see that everything is just the way it has to be This time look deeper in me see how much love has done for me So now begins the countdown See this through with me Be here with me because I don't want to go home alone in the dark [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Nice poem. I don't want to go home alone in the dark either. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done. I really liked the way this was written.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i rode my bike home, through the woods, in the dark once, but my doctor tells me not to do that anymore. good poem, keep writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing... --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Shhhhh don't let this get out but I slept with a night light until I was 9  I loved the poem it was good. Until your next -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
No one wants to go home alone in the dark, but in the end, we all end up alone and in the dark. I really liked the poem. I hope she walked you home. I would. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Heh... very good job. I did like the idea presented in the last line especially.  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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