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HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-04-03 07:17 PM

Somewhere over the rainbow
Lies a land where dreams come true
Not very often found
But by dreamers made believers
This land I have seen
Just with you
Filling every wish
Making them come true
Lost over that rainbow
Somewhere with you.

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-04-03 07:41 PM

Beautiful description of the wonderful things that you have discovered through this person. Short but sweet. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-03 09:38 PM

This is pretty short, but the length of the poem was perfect with the simplicity. Beautiful poem. Nice job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-03 11:05 PM

Very sweet. I liked this very much. It really hit home with me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

4 posted 2001-04-03 11:39 PM

Like they said, short but sweet! I liked this one a lot... isn't it great to feel that way about someone?

*sigh*....

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

[This message has been edited by silvrduck (edited 04-03-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-04-04 02:06 AM

cute and very sweet..

...really very nice!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-04-04 03:01 AM

HappyPretender-
   Very beautiful write...gave me a
   calm and peaceful feeling...
   i really enjoyed reading this..
   keep up the great work!

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-04 09:08 AM

How many times can we write short and sweet about the same piece? Great job expressing a lot in a very few words. great writing, keep up the good work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-04-04 12:21 PM

yea nice job but i think a poems length doesn't seem 2 matter cuz either one long or short as long as the reader gets the true poets emotions a nd thoughts arcossed 2 the heart keep writin though

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-25 11:23 PM

Such beautiful words that bring peace from within. great job my friend. thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

10 posted 2001-04-25 11:44 PM

i really liked it it was short and sweet and fit perfectly together thank you for a read

ben redshaw the great

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

11 posted 2001-04-26 09:17 AM

Great job Rachael. Its really sweet. The Wizard of Oz rocks!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-04-26 09:45 AM

wow, this is wonderful

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

13 posted 2001-04-26 10:32 AM

Great Poem. I really loved it.Keep up the good work.
Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

14 posted 2001-04-26 01:47 PM

Hey,

VERY nice great infact. I loved it if sung right this will be a great song

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

15 posted 2001-04-26 08:20 PM

Very nice! I liked the last few lines, the ending to this one was well done.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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