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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-04-02 05:56 PM

Beast of Fire,
Beast of Ice,
Aid me, Heal me,
Toss the Dice.

Beast of Water,
Beast of Wind,
Rend the earth,
My wounds please mend,

King of Dragons,
Fairie group,
Heed my Call,
O' Striking loop.

Queen of Monsters,
Lord of Blades,
Answer me,
And lead my Raids.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-02 06:00 PM

The rhythm of this poem is absolutely fantastic. Great rhyme scheme, keep posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-02 06:35 PM

this was very good. the first ive read from you. It was very different, but i liked it.

regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-04-02 08:35 PM

Rydia right? It must be Rydia. anyway, great poem!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

4 posted 2001-04-02 08:38 PM

Yup. You got it. Who else can call the Phantom Beasts?

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-02 11:20 PM

*raises a hand*  I can!  Haha....
well yeah.  *cough*  I obviously had this one at the title.
Seems Bryan is giving me some competition... maybe we should all try a few of these?

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-03 08:56 PM

Well done!
I thought this was quite good. Keep up the original works. I enjoy reading these.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-04-18 04:55 PM

that was a marvelous read. simply written but a great read. thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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