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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
someday You're by my side, yet you're not there You have my heart, I promise, I swear You've always had it, never let it go I've just been too scared to let you know Latley, it seems as if you've been giving signs When you smile at me your face shines Its so hard, I know, because we're with another But we can't let them down for each other So my friend lets just wait and see What the future will hold for you and me |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, that such a sweet way of saying it. I wish I had gotten one of those. Great read, thanks for psoting it. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this. I thought it was good, but I have read better from you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was a good read. I guess you have things under control. Well, your feelings at least  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This kind of situation really sucks, but I'm glad that you're able to look at it this way. Great work. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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