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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-04-01 12:08 PM

I was amazed to hear your voice
Although it made me want to cry
I even had a smile on my face
When I got to say my goodbye.

I didn’t think I would ever
Be able to say goodbye to you
This is my final goodbye
So I must bid you adieu.

I loved you so much
With my entire heart
Once we were so close
But looks like we grew apart.

I thought our hearts were one
I thought we were in love
I wrote to you a letter
And attached it to a dove.

She flew up into the wind
And disappeared in the night sky
Did you get my letter
That tells you goodbye?

It took me a month, but I FINALLY got to tell Justin goodbye

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-04-01 12:26 PM

I really liked the image of the dove in the poem. very nicely done

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

2 posted 2001-04-01 12:38 PM

awwwwww i know how hard goodbyes can be *hugs* and you wrote this one beautifuly. great job.
*hugS*

Follow me everything is alright
I'll be the one to tuck you in at night
And if you want to leave I can guarantee
You wont find nobody else like me

Ses
Junior Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 14
The Mountain State

3 posted 2001-04-01 08:29 PM

Tam-
It sounds like you're finally over Justin. Thats good to hear. Altho after his call, and what you told me happened last Monday, I thought you were gonna have a nervous breakdown.

But, you're obviously doing better

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-02 03:59 PM

Great post, Tamma.
Nicely done.
Keep posting...

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-03 07:25 PM

It's good to see you moving on. Hope to see you progress more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-04-04 08:28 AM

there's only one person I never got to say goodbye to. THey've been dead for a little over six months now. I can't say goodbye because I need to say I'm sorry. Anyway, nice poem Tamma.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2001-04-05 01:30 AM

Tamma~
Letting go of someone is hard, especially when you grow close to them. I dont know how I would react if I was in your position. At least not as easy as you are. Its hard for me to say goodbye to anyone. But your doing what you have to. Great job on the poem!

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

8 posted 2001-04-05 01:40 PM

Hey,

Good poem enough said. Until your next

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 04-06-2001).]

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

9 posted 2001-04-05 04:27 PM

Hi LINC its really none of your buisness how many bf's shes had i bet its all about one guy and well as a matter of fact ive only heard of two and well shes my friend and i gots love for her and i love your poem babes

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"

Empty tears
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 64

10 posted 2001-04-05 10:38 PM

Great poem,it gave me hope that ill be able to move on w/my life after a really painful breakup. thanx for giving a shred of hope in this dark,hopeless world.
~Brittany~

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

11 posted 2001-04-07 06:09 AM

Wow, I loved this.
It was so real.
And so appropriate at this stage in my life. I don't know if anyone else understands this but you know how a poem can often be a lot more powerful if you're going through something like that at the point when you read the poem (that most likely made no sense). Yeah well, I'm trying to say goodbye to this friend but I can't. I loved him so much and he hurt me a lot.

Wonderful poem.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

12 posted 2001-04-07 01:31 PM

Tamma... lately you've been using a rhyme scheme. Very cool! You're trying different aspects of poetry, that is very admirable. I personally prefer the works I have seen of yours that have a rhyme to them, in most cases.
Hope you keep this trend up.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

13 posted 2001-05-04 01:06 PM

Good for you Tamma. I'm glad you've made a decision and stuck with it. Happy for ya

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

14 posted 2001-05-04 09:02 PM

yay for you beeing able to say goodbye thats great!
i loved the part about the dove it's georgous.
keep it up
katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

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