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0 posted 2001-03-31 10:14 PM


                        Sometimes I ask the question "why?"
                        Yet the question, never answered.
                        In absence of an answer, the answer
                        Emerges yet another question of why?

                                            -- Linc


                        I wrote this one just contemplating the purpose of life. Not just my life but life in general. Its quick, short, and I liked it so I posted it. Thanks for taking the time to read even my crapy work


"Who the hell cares?"

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 03-31-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-31 10:53 PM


Hey Linc...
I have a question about your poem.  Is the third line meant to be "In absence of an answer, the answer" or "In absence of an answer, the answer"?
This would change the meaning...
both ways though, it arouses a few questions.  Or should I say, a few answers?    
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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2 posted 2001-03-31 11:42 PM


Yet another question...yet another answer. You may see it as you like for my poetry is to be read as the reader wishes to read it not as the poet ment it to be read. If that makes any sense. yet another question why are all questions responded with a question? DOMN these question....

                -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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3 posted 2001-04-01 09:54 PM


AHhhhhhhhhh!!!!! This is deep haha.
Wow, I liked this one.
VERY well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-04-01 09:59 PM


Yet the question, never answered.
that is so true..hehehehe...well said and very "mind boggling"

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5 posted 2001-04-01 10:09 PM


Oh wow, this makes you think! I like it.. very much!  

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

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6 posted 2001-04-02 07:50 AM


Hey,

         Thanks for all the nice replies guys. Until your next poem...

        -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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7 posted 2001-04-02 10:29 AM


Ooh this poem should carry a health warning, It is so deep I got lost for days contemplating the meaning of life. Great piece of work.
Andrew.

" War is peace,
Freedom is Slavery,
Ignorance is strength" - George Orwell "1984"

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8 posted 2001-04-02 12:51 PM


Why is certainly one of the most important questions one can ask.  Good job on a thought provoking poem.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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9 posted 2001-04-02 03:45 PM


This is great... very short, and very good.  It raised questions in my mind.  Keep posting!  

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

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10 posted 2001-04-11 09:13 PM


you made me think there  
that was a good one
great read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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11 posted 2001-04-11 09:33 PM


thats great. it's really thought provoking. i'd write more but... i can't... stop... thinking... about it...

everything is skin deep

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12 posted 2001-04-12 03:58 PM


all i have to say is this has to go back to page one.

Ask me why?
and I'll reply,
"WHY" NOT.,.      peace out..

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13 posted 2001-04-12 10:01 PM


Hey,

   Thanks for the replies guys  

    -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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14 posted 2001-04-17 03:49 PM


I couldn't beleive this is your most recent piece... Err big apology really... I'm sorry Linc I used your catchphrase...  
Sorry...
<<<_Andrew_>>>

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15 posted 2001-04-17 04:01 PM


yea... thats a question we all ask rselves too much...which i believe the answer is to be lived as only a few will be anwsered...
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