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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-03-31 05:59 PM

An angel lays her head on my shoulder
Holds her hand in front of my eyes
She touches my heart
Changes the way I feel about love
When she moves her hand
You’re the first thing I see
Makes you loving energy come to me

No matter how much I try
I can’t take my eyes, of your heavenly body

Every night I can’t sleep cause of you
You make my heart just go so crazy
I’m in love with you
Feel in love with heaven in your eyes
The touch of your hand
cause you’re all I dream of
for long as the stars shine above

For every day in the year
I cry a tear
Which will spell put your name

No matter how much I try
I can’t take my eyes, of your heavenly body

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-01 10:37 PM

Very sweet poem. I really liked the way you expressed everything within this poem.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-02 04:11 PM

"An angel lays her head on my shoulder
Holds her hand in front of my eyes
She touches my heart
Changes the way I feel about love
When she moves her hand
You’re the first thing I see
Makes you loving energy come to me"

Wow, this is so sweet! Great job! I liked it a lot.. Very well written.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-04-02 05:00 PM

Oh this is so beautiful!!!! OMG! it's definetly going into my library!! Ohhh it's so sweet!! good luck!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-02 05:55 PM

this was out of all i have read from u so far your best. definatly a libary piece!
the feelings, and the imagery was so well experssed.
regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-11 09:08 PM

you have always marveled me with your poems
here is another one that did
you are one romantic
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-04-13 04:41 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!

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