Teen Poetry #4 |
The Final Stand |
Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
thats sweet i liked it!!~jo~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Naw, I think this is a demonstration of how far you've come. It was good to read, but you've improved a lot and write much better these days than did you awhile ago. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I loved it keep up the great job. Somethings changed in your poetry I wont say what it is but I like it better -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Personally I think it's great, it paints images perfectly in my mind at least and I consider that the mark of a great poet. Keep it up. >¶Øʆ< |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really liked this and i felt i could really identify with what you were saying. Keep up the good work. Andrew. " War is peace, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not one of my favs by you.......but nonetheless it was a good one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
You have done better work but this is still a good piece. I agree with Allan, you can really see how much you've improved as a poet, so keep posting love. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was really sweet must be really special in your eyes thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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