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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Darkness wrought by evil, I cast my gaze upwards, towards the skies, And take my sword in hand. Spawn of hatred, drop and fall Children of the beast, Heed my war-like call, I am the Paladin. Feel my icy blade, Cleaving through the rage, Cutting through your black blockade, To strike your master down. Once I was like you, Tainted with filth, Leaving in my wake a bloodied dew, But no longer… Feel my calm silent blow, Leaving yet another Darkling dead, Come at me, come on let’s go, Hate, Rage, Death, Agony, No more! I won’t stand for it, Another endless door, Behind which lies another innocent death. I will end it now! With my shining blade, I’ll show you how I will strike your dark master down. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
OMG I sooo simply adore this!! I'm not lying either, you are a poet after my own heart!! WOW!!! that's all I can say the title caught my eye and I read it and I'm so glad I did!! Keep it up please =) can't you tell I'm into that sort of thing!? *giggles* Tmd, Kristen "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Heh..thanks for the nice words. I've recently been playing the Japanese version of Final Fantasy 4, and was inspired by the main character, Cecil. I'm planning on doing one about each of the main characters. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, as a fellow follower of the FF series I have to say kudos! This is a great idea, if I knew that these forums were more RPG oriented, I'd say it would make a fine challenge to choose an FF character and do a poem about him/her. In fact, I may try it myself! Watch out, Zeromus!  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This poem is really outstanding. I do think this is the first poem of yours I read and its going straight to my library. This, your wokr is great keep it up I am looking forward to your next poem. Until then. Oh by the way to you play muds (multi user domains) -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." [This message has been edited by Linc (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm a fan of MUDs...  is there an FFIV MUD that I should see???   The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
I've never been one for MUDs. I just could never get into them. I'll stick with my console systems and emulators. It can't be! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not my fav by you, but I did think it was good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
FFIV MUDS? I'll just pretend that I know what everyone is talking about. Nice job, Kosetsu. I enjoyed the read. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
join the club Fading. I usually act like I know what everyone is talking about..heh. Anyway, thanks. It can't be! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your poems have such an imagination in it. That is really good. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
everytime i read your stuff i become more and more amazed at your talent. i love this poem like i love all of yours. lots of love, dana |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
One question...do u own Everquest? it sure sounds like it. nice poem. *S* staci |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Nope, I don't own Everquest, and don't plan on buying it, at least not until I get a bigger harddrive *is down to about 1/8 of his max hard drive space*. This is based off of one of the old Final Fantasy games from the SNES It can't be! |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Fading I will tell you what a mud is later  "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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