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Teen Poetry #4

I thought you'd be there

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-03-31 02:40 PM

I thought you'd be there

when i first saw you, i knew it was too good to be true
being together is something we finally did pursue
you smiled and told me you'd never leave my side
but the road got rough and you didn't stay for the ride
we split up and went our seprate ways
and now you're not here to fill my days
you told me you'd always, always be there
you left though, it seems without a care
so now you've left me, and gone far away
but still i go on and im here to stay
i won't let you back in, but to you this i swear
i'll never leave your side, i will always be there

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-03-31 05:07 PM

That is a nice thing to say to smeone that has hurt you. That shows the inner strength of you character. You have a good heart. Thanks for the share

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-31 09:21 PM

This has a marvelous message to it. Why be vengeful, when you can set an example? Great job.
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-03-31 10:53 PM

GRRRR

     I hate people like that. nice poem though

         -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-01 09:44 PM

Very mature of you.
I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-04-01 09:49 PM

i loved this one...cuz it said sumthing which strikes true time and time again especially within relationships..:
you smiled and told me you'd never leave my side
but the road got rough and you didn't stay for the ride

i hate it when ppl do that...
all up a good read..

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