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Teen Poetry #4

the royal blues

princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-03-31 04:28 AM

My finger swirls around the royal blues
the midnight blacks
the brilliant violets
that tattoo my flesh
flashing inside my mind I recall all the times
that I screamed
that I begged
and you just laughed
the sensation of pain when I press
push on the bruise
push on the floor
look at the door
remember splashing in the spring puddles
smiling at you
smiling at life
hoping it will last
but my aches are more internal
bleeding outside
bleeding inside
love that kills

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-04-04 07:03 PM

This one really worked my mind in overtime.
You definitely have the talent,
there's no doubt about that
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-04-05 07:52 AM

The more you write, the better your poetry becomes. I agree with acrire, you definetely have talen, so keep writing and posting.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-04-05 01:18 PM

Hey,

Wow, this is cool I liked it keep it up and until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-05 04:30 PM

Ouch....this poem was hurtful....well to you. I felt the pain. Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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