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You're Beyond me |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Standing in the rain, I here the thunder call me Raindrops hitting my face, I close my eyes As a lightning strikes just behind me. I’m screaming out your name, cause I need you so Can’t reason with the time, the time that’s standing still For as long as I’ve longed to be hold. I need some help, a little room inside my heart Cause your love is beyond my reach, every night is so dark So lonely without your warm, wish everything was just like before. But no matter what, you’re beyond me. Trying to express, the way I feel in words So you’ll understand, the way I am right here Please let me release all your hurts. As true as the stars, the truly shine from above There’s no lie to this, I want you to know right from the start that you are all I am ever thinking of. I need some love, the word that sets me free I’m ready for whatever’s you answer, to lost can’t breathe So hopeful I can’t think straight, wish the question weren’t to late. But no matter what, you’re beyond me. Even if the world changed, change wouldn’t be enough Not even if I chose the open road, I wouldn’t find the way to your love your beautiful face is all I can remember, since the 24th of December where I saw you from the first time. I need some happiness, some caring words from your eyes Sitting under the bridge singing, singing songs of love deep inside The green grass on the other side, keeps putting your picture in my mind. But no matter what, you’re beyond me. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is filled with such sorrow...incredible poetry here. Had the tempo of a song....I enjoyed it greatly, thank you for posting!  *Krista Knutson* |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
The title drew me to this poem. It seemed to so real, so raw, yet so delicate. I loved this, I really did. I hope to read more from you. |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Hey, i loved the poem. it really relfects how i'm feeling now. and just a little something extra i thought i'd share with you, the 24 of december was when i was first asked out my girlfriend( now ex but not sure why she broke up with me) anyhow i guess i'm getting off subject here. i thought the poem was great, i loved it. later. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was wow! so sad yet angry and confused..is my opionon. rehona a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a sad poem. Very well written, though... Keep posting. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very very sad poem. Heartfelt. I liked this. Hope things get better for u  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Such emotions being expressed on this one. Sad though. hope things are better "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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