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~sugarpie313~
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0 posted 2001-03-30 05:51 PM


(i know the ending is bad.... but i just wrote this really quickly LOL and it explains it sort of so..)

i sit here thinking of that day
wanting to forget it
and if i can't that's okay
it'll just be something i won't admit.

it was the second time we dated
i wanted to make it stand out
so i came up with a nickname
that would tell what it's about.

sugar is what you called me
pie is what i love to eat
13 the day, 3 the month
that's the date we started the feat.

giving it another try
i thought it would work
but it didn't, and it ended
and i'm left with this stupid quirk.

sugarpie313
a name i'm now stuck with
but i'm glad that this one's decent
and not something like wentoutonthe13th( @patheticone.com)

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

© Copyright 2001 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-30 06:18 PM


'@patheticone.com' haha... nah
What we need to do is find a way to make that name represent something else... then all your problems are solved  
so let's see... sugarpie is easy... that just represents your sweetness... 313 hmmm...
3+1+3 is my fav number (err that's 7 for the slow ones  ) so there problem solved, your name should not remind you of your dirty ol' ex anymore.  Instead you will just think... 'boy that Jason sure does ramble on alot... I really, really wish he'd shut up"

ummm... yeah I think that's my que
great poem sugarpie7
Jason

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2 posted 2001-03-31 05:20 AM


Good job!  Haha... very cute poem here.  You obviously wrote this quickly, but impulse poetry is so much fun.  
~Allan

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3 posted 2001-03-31 12:55 PM


Heh, good job, sugarpie.  Very cute.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

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4 posted 2001-03-31 03:41 PM


Such an interesting look at your name. It seems that, when we are involved with someone seriously, we are always stuck with someone from them. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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5 posted 2001-03-31 04:50 PM


Hey, look at me.  I'm left with this name too  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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6 posted 2001-04-01 09:30 PM


Yea I dated a girl name Dopey.....geesh!!
She was UUUUUGLY!!!!


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7 posted 2001-04-02 05:13 PM


     Hey Val, I'm back and I lke this poem!  It sucks you have the name to keep reminding you, but it's a sweet name, you shold be happyt o have it.  

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

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8 posted 2001-04-03 12:13 PM


nice star Dopey  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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