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Nothing Is What It Appears To Be Part 1
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Nothing Is What It Appears To Be Part 1 |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Everything is topsy turvy, the world is upside down. I haven't seem to stop smiling, ever since you've been around. Nothing is what it appears to be anymore, and to tell you the truth, I'm glad. Because I couldn't stand the way things were, in fact it made me sad. The World has turned my life around, and made it something I like. I see no reason to be upset, no reason to yell and fight. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's amazing how your outlook can change after you meet a certian person. I don't quite get the last line, though. Sounds like there is trouble in paradise. I hope things work out! Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This poem isn't your best work but it is certainly a lot of fun to read. i'm glad things are going well for you. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not a bad job, as Ban said not really your best but it's nice to see something positive again.  ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
good job. not your best. but still real nice read. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Just as everyone else said, this wasn't your best... it's a very simple poem, but I'm glad things are going well. Thanks for sharing. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done allysa! OOOooooooooooo you like somebody! OOoooooooo!!!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Ahh, yes, nice to see something positive. My writing teachers say that you need to make people laugh or make them cry. Well, I can only make them cry. Anyways, yes Dopey, I like someone. I've liked someone for a long time and he's the only person who can make me laugh for two and a half hours straight. Justin. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your teachers have molded you into a better writter Allysa. So, what's going on with Nitsuj now? you moved yet? "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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