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Teen Poetry #4

Check it out........

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-03-29 03:34 PM

In light of summer time's merriment,
and the fact that I don't like the weather,
the fact that springs only just begun,
and we all need to do something together,
I've decided you all should check out,
a poem written by me,
because inside the poem, on the third page,
is something you might like to see,
The poem is one I wrote long ago,
it's title is I Don't Want To Say Goodbye,
and if you don't go and visit,
I think that I'm going to cry.
You wouldn't want to be responsible,
for making me sadder than sad,
and I promise that if u check this out,
it's absolutely not anything bad.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-29 04:33 PM

I read that poem i thought it to be quiet good, as i said in my reply.
great poem!
REgina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-03-29 07:40 PM

I'll go check it out Allysa, so don't cry

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-29 08:06 PM

I think I might go and check that out as well. Nice job here.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-01 12:49 PM

This was weird having a poem written about go checking out a poem. I read it! I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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