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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-29 01:45 PM


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keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
1 posted 2001-03-29 02:34 PM


Regina, Another very dark, dangerous poem. I liked it so much. You never cease to amaze me. You really painted a picture with words in this one. But it is a picture I have seen too many times before. I have alot of these poems, I don't know if writing them made things better or worse. Hope it's helping you. Can't wait to see more.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2001-03-29 07:34 PM


Wow this is QUITE impressive.  Very good expression of pain here.... good poem.  Good job   I hope everything's okay.....(wow do I feel ignorant..)

Bel

"And you're my obsession
I love you to the bones
And Ana wrecks your life
Like an anorexia life"
- "Ana's Song", Silverchair

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