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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2001-03-28 07:37 PM

Rain washes off the dirt from my face
Silent flashes of light race their noisy brothers
The wind sings me a song to calm me down
All the trees perform a beautiful dance for me
People run indoors for a reason unknown to me
Why would they flee this beautiful day?

"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist
"Optimi consiliarii mortui"-learn from the past
"Otia dant vitia"-the devil finds work for idle hands

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-28 09:08 PM

short and to the point.
great work!
Regina

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-28 11:54 PM

Insightful. It's nice to go out and watch the trees dance.

And great job on the title.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2001-03-30 04:04 PM

Storms can be frightning, or they can be beautiful. It all depends on your outlook. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into your point of view.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-03-31 03:17 PM

I like your outlook. I liked this. It was short, and well written. Nice job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-01 08:57 PM

Maybe cuz there's too much sun and they are all allergic to it.....or maybe it's spring and they are allergic to Spring......or maybe they needed to go to the bathroom.
Who knows!!

Good poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-09 05:19 PM

great write my friend
i enjoyed every line on this one
simple words but outstanding work
thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-09 08:02 PM

Now i have the U2 song stuck in my head. anyway, this is very well written, you did an excellent job on this, definetely one of my favorites from you. keep up the good work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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