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Teen Poetry #4

i'll just assume

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 2001-03-28 03:09 AM

I'll just keep assuming
that maybe your out there.
Perhaps you still care
but cant find the words.
Afraid it will come out wrong
no matter how it's phrased.

Have you ever dreamed of me
then woke with tears on your lips.
Aching to make me understand
how it is your heart beats.
Yet knowing it'll never be
becuase we were too in love.

Smile at my memory
please dont regret anything.
From our tears we grew
and the pain gave us roots.
Admit there is still love
like that of parellel souls.

~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

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Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-03-28 03:49 PM

I think this is very well done. It has a lot of emotion and a great impact to it! It really had an effect on me.
Very good job. I sincerely enjoyed this.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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