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starryeyed999
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since 2001-03-05
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0 posted 2001-03-27 11:05 PM



I wish that my day would come,
So I can be swept up and carried higher than the sun.
Nothing makes sense,
Nobody cares,
I could disapper forever
and not one person would shed a single tear.
I may not succeed in all that I do,
but when one little thing goes my way,
I'll take it for granted and get carried away.

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1 posted 2001-03-27 11:23 PM


People would care if you suddendly passed on. Don't be so negative.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-03-28 03:42 AM


don't worry things happen life is unfair we gotta live wit it

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-28-2001).]

Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-03-28 03:51 PM


Hey, I would care... I don't know you very well but I read your poetry and I learn quite a bit about you.  You seem like a sweet person who has a lot of emotion about her.  Also, I do enjoy reading your poetry.
But it was a good poem, had a lot of heart to it.  Well done.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind.  For I can only see out of my own.  ~~Carly Van Dort


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4 posted 2001-03-28 04:34 PM


I think everyone here at Passions would care.  Hence the name, Family of Friends... great job, on this though.  Your poetry is always a joy to read.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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5 posted 2001-04-06 03:22 PM


You'll be surprised on how many people do actually care.  Just open your eyes and you'll see  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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