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Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

0 posted 2001-03-26 11:51 PM

And Love is as Such

Chained by pink petals
Held down by weak, delicate arms,
Of which I could easily break free
But never will.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2001-03-27 12:25 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2001-03-27 12:25 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2001-03-27 12:25 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

4 posted 2001-03-27 12:26 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

5 posted 2001-03-27 12:26 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

6 posted 2001-03-27 12:26 PM

Interesting, intersting a short, maybe the shortest I've ever read.

I missed you this weekend, or maybe you missed me, I don't know, I've stopped counting now.

Would this short little analogy of complicated ideas be about your latest?
Just wodnering, it's an interesting idea.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

7 posted 2001-03-27 04:55 AM

oops, my bad, my server was screwed up and I just continued to push "Retry" sorry.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-03-27 03:23 PM

She's a liar deranger, haha she just liked your poem that much!!!!
haha

ANyhow I thought you did VERY VERY VERY VERY well on this one. Love....wow....you described it so well. Kudos to you on this one. Very impressive.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-03-27 05:20 PM

I liked this one. Excellent description of love. Love the ending.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

10 posted 2001-03-27 05:25 PM

OOOooooOOOoohhhh nice one buddy...OH yeah..very very nice indeed.........
~Carly

"The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake."
- Leonardo da Vinci

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

11 posted 2001-03-27 09:32 PM

i LOVE this poem!!! it is awesome!!!

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

12 posted 2001-03-28 04:06 AM

BITE ME Dopey! I DON'T LIE - well, maybe just those few times that I well um...never mind...

Good poem, I think I've said that already, about...six times...

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

13 posted 2001-03-28 04:41 PM

Wow, AngelShell, you really liked this one, huh?

Good job on this, Deranger. I think it could be longer... but good job just the same.

--Marie

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

14 posted 2001-04-06 05:46 PM

one of the best I've read all day
i really like this one
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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