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Teen Poetry #4

I don't care

Ricky
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 28
West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 11:30 PM

I don't care what you think
Why won't you leave me alone
Your opinions stink
I hope to God you never get a clone

Why won't you mind your own business
And keep out of mine
Yuo should know why this is
So go ahead and wine

I am no longer listening to your crap
So go cry to your mommy
And don't look back
Because I am very freakin angry

Get out of my life
You don't see what I do
So what, without me you can't survive
Right now you treat me like poo

So Good BYE!!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-27 03:03 PM

Nicely done......you did alter some words so the poem could make it.....ex. poo....haha....so yea. I liked it though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2001-03-27 04:23 PM

Hmmm someone's a little upset. I hope you feel better now.

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-28 04:49 PM

This is a great poem, but sounds like you've got some anger inside of you? I hope things calm down and get a little better

Great job

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

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