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0 posted 2001-03-26 08:21 PM


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1 posted 2001-03-26 09:08 PM


Well if you know it and you seem to be a bit more positive than normal, do it......take a stand and love yourself for who you are.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-03-26 11:43 PM


this poem was great
cuz this is a question i ask 2 many times 2 myself
which i'm still in that same path 2 ma true self wat ma life is about
& i hope u be able 2 find it in a positive way
great poem keep writin

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3 posted 2001-03-27 01:13 PM


I think this was a great poem!  The positive tone was a nice departure from your usual.  
Yes, take a stand!  Learn to love yourself for what you have become.  
Think of it this way... you have only ever been one person, and that is you.  You know yourself like nobody ever will, you will spend the rest of your life as who you are.
Every observation you ever made, every thought you ever had, was had by the girl in the mirror.
So love the fact that it is you who sees the world, you who writes the poetry, and it is you who creates for yourself the entire world around you.
Yeah that was confusing... but hey...  
See you around, Marie.  
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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4 posted 2001-04-04 07:16 PM


I agree with Dopey on this one
You have to learn to love yourself for who you are
Your individuality is what makes you 1 in a million

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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5 posted 2001-04-04 07:38 PM


This is a beautiful poem love, and i always admire the way you make your emotions flow through your writing.  you have every right to love yourself, there is so many things to love.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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6 posted 2001-04-08 10:30 AM


Hey,

   Well...I don't have much to say they said it all   until your next masterpeice

    -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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