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Alone again
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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Alone once more again I fear No more shall I be with you my dear You chose to go away to leave me behind Knowing not it was for you that my heart did shine Again I face the winds of the world without you by my side. I sought only happiness and love for you without any pride But then you got up and chose to let me go I never wanted to leave, only to stay, but all I got was no All I have ever known was my eptiness and pain And without you they are all I shall have again To know no light only the dark the darkness of my soul I bleed to know the truth of it but I guess I shall never know How I long to hold you to feel you once again But now I know that our time is at an end You left me behind to myself once more And know I sit empty and alone along the rocky shore |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
VERY good job on this poem. The lines each glow with individual excellence! This is absolutely marvelous!  If I haven't said it before, welcome to Passions in Poetry.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
OOoOOOOooooOOoohhh...me like, me like very much...Sucks to be alone, huh? Ah well...things'll get peachy soon..... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was pretty sad. I liked it though. Hope to see more of you around!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is sad... Very good job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
this was sad but very good at the same time just know that you can never find the right person until you are alone so wait it out everything is good in the end "Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Thank you all very much for saying what you did. i am still very unsure about having any ability at all with writing, especially with this being the second poem i have ever written. so thank you again your kind words are appreciated and i feel a little more confident now. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
You'll find someone in your life  Minna It's hard seeing someone loving your ex, when it's your ex friend who's loving him. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
you write very well. this was a great piece. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
YOu have done really well I like your style in writing I see a lot of talent in you keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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