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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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Sorry I have so much hate building up in me. I have so much anger that you can never see I have so much resentment that you could never be... Sorry for... I have so many memories you weren't there for. And so many moments where my heart just tore, cuz you weren't there! And it's something you'll never be Sorry for... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You obviously have a lot of resentment towards the person you are writing this about, and I'm glad that you were able to share this with us. Writing tends to help, doesn't it?  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
that is exactly how i saw ma situation don't need 4 the hate cuz at the end they the ones whos gonna be sorry 4 wat they did regrets that can't be taken back |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
Actually this poem is about my dad. He has never been a part of my life and now wants in and I don't know which way to go. I'm still mad about him never being there but I do want him in my life, but I feel it's just too late. Ehh...so confused... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, this is a good piece. Very nicely written. Good job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here.....I hope you make the right choice. Good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Most of the time, it's just right to let your feelings out in such a tactful way. Yu did good my friend "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Well, I hate to be a dead weight, but I tend to lead with my heart, the brain comes second. Just be cautious, what could it hurt? Anyway, good peom, I like it a lot, into the library! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This was very well written and you express your emotions in this piece really well. Thanks for the read and keep posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I see why you are confused. This has got to be hard, but you have the support from me and the rest of us. I hope all goes well with your father. Your poem was very good, i felt anger and sadness. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
*cringes* Very good poem... Anger bites though...Try listening to Fraggle Rock! It helped me. ~Carly Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be |
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