i know that this poem could use a lot of work and i've revised it several times but it doesn't seem to want to turn itself into a good poem. tell me what you think...
velvet green engulfs my eyes, my mind,
soft emerald cradles my spirit
in gentle, delicate hands.
bright yellows brush the surface,
and warmth dances for my heart.
my perception goes beyond my reflection,
and i am dazzled
by the brilliance and life that i find.
it holds me fast,
but i want no escape.
my spirit walks the avenues
of fragile, faithful light.
i have everything i need,
and it is in your eyes that i find my soul.
Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.